Tuesday, January 16, 2007

Time's running out !

Fumbling our way through life, it seems to me
is much like a series of short stories
that we insist into a novel badly done
and the editor was out to lunch that day
Overplotted, characters obscure and undefined
It isn't War And Peace and we're not Tolstoy

History will clean it up, the victors always do
well after the fact of life, a critical review
But history makes a lifetime work of censure
and won't submit a damn thing of its own
lived well or badly, scrawled equally across a page
Every life leaves tracks that quickly fade

But it breathed and bled through pain and fear
it smiled and loved, this life so badly penned the moments each and everlastingly connected
like numbered dots that form an image
and it could have, might have been a masterpiece
if we could see the colors in bold strokes

Each of us wrote hurriedly, hands shaking, novices
as best we could, one draft without revision
Too much paper, the dialog dashed off unrehearsed
apprenticed with no clear need to learn the craft
Far too much to ask and yet it's what we're given
and all too soon the pen runs dry, too soon

(Inspired by the Muse - Time is Running Out

I think I'm drowning asphyxiated
I wanna break this spell that you've created
you're something beautiful a contradiction
I wanna play the game I want the friction )

2 comments:

since81 said...

profound and well threaded.

you write well manas matie !

Meenakshi said...

I suggest for once scrawl back few page breaks,
You might find the some beautiful impressions this rush has left in your life,
Some amazing moments you might have witnessed….
& various bonds that got incredibly strong just because “Time is running”….Out
Time has never been anyone’s pal, it will keep running out…
Its worthless catching it!
The best we can do is craft a mark, even after the palates run out of hues.

I wanna break this spell that you've created
you're something beautiful a contradiction…. That’s for you Rearden : )